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Wednesday, September 16, 2015

               Oteha valley school

On a cold windy day I went to Oteha valley school to watch a show about two teams versing each other like a cheetah waiting for his prey.They wanted to win as bad as being the first one to get the I phone 6.


The dancing was as amazing as a fire dance.There were lots of dancers but I liked party in the USA.When I saw the moves I was so happy.There were people singing but they were quiet and some of them were as loud as a birds.We were waiting for about three minutes before the show started.There were two hosts and there were three people in each team.


So in the teams you had to answer the questions such as songs like Ghost busters,Party in the USA and many others.

Monday, June 15, 2015

No teachers

                                                 No teachers
                     
                         before  
 

I opened the door and there were kids everywhere. Boys were climbing out of the window and there were paper planes all over the place.My best friend Anna was holding one of the rats from the science lab and the rest were running all over the room.Anna told me there were no teachers, none at all. 

                      After

There were rats everywhere on the floor. Everyone was screaming,screeching and yelling there were no teachers just kids. I could smell the rotten food from the rats and it smelled disgusting it was like pigs splashing in mud.You could see the rats everywhere and people on the tables it was like the stature of Liberty getting built. You could taste rotten cheese and it was very bad as bad as a rotten egg."What are we going to do?"said Anna.

Wednesday, June 3, 2015


                                    The forest

             Before
Come to my silent forest,you'll love the peace and cool colours.  
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                         After 

You feel the dark silence in the forest.You hear hundreds of souls inside of you.Under your feet you can feel branches that have fallen down from the tree that has no leaves.You also feel the coldness in the dark sun. The low sun is as cold as an icy cold snow .The leaves are as dark as the night and the leaves are rustling with the wind. 
edited by Mandi

Monday, May 4, 2015

The Desert


As I approached the immense desert, the sand dunes dwarfed me. I felt like a little kid lost in a mall.The mighty heat cooked my body like a roast turkey for Thanksgiving. The green cactus stood strong and steady like a statue. The cactus spikes seemed as sharp as butcher’s knives. A slithering snake passed around me with no fear which made me shiver. The sun had seemed to boil my eyes and diminished my range. The gusts of sandy wind blew my mind away.

I heard myself groaning from dragging through the hot desert, as if I was a sloth. I drank water from the oasis. It tasted better than eating at a huge buffet, from all the walking. I heard my pet lizard whisper from my shoulder. It told me to find a shelter because the desert will become very dark. I made my way into a cave I found for shelter.

I gazed at the stars. There were billions of them. They seemed as bright as firework. I went into the cave to get some sleep.



By Langkee, Laura, Anita and Justin

Wednesday, April 29, 2015


                                           
                                                 Wetlands

As I approached the wetlands my eyes were drawn 
Image result for wetlandstowards  a crocodile swimming in the muddy water and its teeth were huge. I saw the big trees and bushes they were very large and long .I could taste
the saltest water I have ever tasted.As I was walking I could touch the slimy cold wheat touching me it felt so cold and wet I also felt rough moss.As I heard the birds sing I looked up and I saw the birds flying high in the air with colourful feathers coming down.The wetlands smelled like mud in the air.