One word holiday

                 WALT write compound and complex sentence

                                                                 Inside

The burning hot sun was making me go crazy because it kept my big house warm.

I played on my gold iPad for one hour because it was raining hard outside.

I was in my soft bed all day because I was so lazy that I couldn't stand up.

I watched a funny movie with my great family because it was Saturday night and we had lots of popcorn.

               Oteha valley school

On a cold windy day I went to Oteha valley school to watch a show about two teams versing each other like a cheetah waiting for his prey.They wanted to win as bad as being the first one to get the I phone 6.

The dancing was as amazing as a fire dance.There were lots of dancers but I liked party in the USA.When I saw the moves I was so happy.There were people singing but they were quiet and some of them were as loud as a birds.We were waiting for about three minutes before the show started.There were two hosts and there were three people in each team.

So in the teams you had to answer the questions such as songs like Ghost busters,Party in the USA and many others.

No teachers

                                                 No teachers
                     
                         before  
 

I opened the door and there were kids everywhere. Boys were climbing out of the window and there were paper planes all over the place.My best friend Anna was holding one of the rats from the science lab and the rest were running all over the room.Anna told me there were no teachers, none at all. 

                      After

There were rats everywhere on the floor. Everyone was screaming,screeching and yelling there were no teachers just kids. I could smell the rotten food from the rats and it smelled disgusting it was like pigs splashing in mud.You could see the rats everywhere and people on the tables it was like the stature of Liberty getting built. You could taste rotten cheese and it was very bad as bad as a rotten egg."What are we going to do?"said Anna.

                                    The forest

             Before

Come to my silent forest,you'll love the peace and cool colours.  

                         After 

You feel the dark silence in the forest.You hear hundreds of souls inside of you.Under your feet you can feel branches that have fallen down from the tree that has no leaves.You also feel the coldness in the dark sun. The low sun is as cold as an icy cold snow .The leaves are as dark as the night and the leaves are rustling with the wind. 
edited by Mandi